Core Values Essay- Revision

This is for my academic writing class.
Instructions from professor.
Revise your assignment based on feedback from your instructor, your peers, and/or your own writing goals. In your revision, track the changes from your first draft so that your instructor can easily identify where you made revisions. Submit your revised essay as a file in this assignment folder.
Use strikethrough to indicate areas that should be deleted.
Use bold-face to indicate areas where you are adding content.
The attached file is the essay that was submitted and needs revision. The one piece of feedback I received was “The order in which you present your core values in your introduction do not align with how they are outlined in the body of the essay. Make sure you are consistent with your order of information so it is easy for your reader to follow.”
Please update anything you believe could help make the essay better, Thank you!

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